Here is the discussion page for the storybook Abhorrent! To everyone intrested in joining this storybook, thank you! I'm so excited to start, I've been itching to write a dark sci-fi piece!
Last edited by FadingBrighter on Mon Aug 03, 2015 4:02 pm, edited 1 time in total.
I would VERY much love to join May I? This looks like it is gonna be epic, and your ideas are brilliant ^^
Dorian, are you the one adding all the spices to our food? Of course I am. Why? Because frankly the food here tastes like poorly cooked sawdust. It genuinely tastes how Solas looks.
Hey Chaser, I get the feeling that the rebellion from the Grey zone you talked about in your backstory is going to happen soon. I think I'm going to have Yurei comment on it in his next post...
Okay, so what if Daiki and Yurei become involved in an attack on Vivarion's upper levels? This could lead to a large battle scene, as well as bring the characters on Vivarion together. And in that battle, Richter could unleash his Abhorrent powers to fight Daiki or Yurei, or both. And that would result in their Abhorrent statuses being exposed, causing their simultaneous ejection from Vivarion. This could also create a grudge between Richter and Daiki, being that they would've gotten off on the wrong foot. And...yeah...I've been thinking about this story way too much.
Also, I'll be without Wifi until Tuesday. Just letting you know.
The hardest part of writing science fiction is knowing actual science. The same applies for me and realistic fiction.
Chaser, Okay. I could make it so they get dragged along somehow(seeing as I don't see either of them really wanting to get involved). Then they could run into Richter after everything has gone down and he could fight them. It would be a pretty even match until Richter unleashes his Abhorrent abilities, which would easily whoop Yurei. But then Daiki could come in and go berserker and get the two out before Richter has a chance to do any serious damage. After that all three could be detained and sent to the surface. Does that sound good?
Also, sorry for the super long post guys. I've just been caught up with moving and so it has been a bit hard to find opportunities to write:) Since we have so few members, I'm going to say that it's alright to post every other post, just try to be conscientious of other writers. This is especially true while half of the characters are still in Vivarion and half are on the surface!
