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She isn't in her dorm right now, but her belongings are.
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Ok! What kind of belongings, anything I particular I should mention?
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Just a suitcase that she put under her bed. She threw her uniform in the trash though.
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Posted! Let me know if I should change anything!
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@TheForgottenKing

I found your post a little difficult to follow because you didn't indent properly (start and end paragraphs) with dialogue and you used the wrong 'your" several times and then there were just spelling mistakes... if you don't know these grammar and spelling rules would you please look them up and edit your post? I've noticed them with your last few posts and it can be difficult to follow a conversation in writing when it's laid out improperly.

I really am not trying to be rude so please don't take this personally!
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I submitted my character (I hope it isn't too late to join!)
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*gasp* BLAS-CHAN~~~! I will call you that from now on :3 Dun question the insane one~~~

Anyways, back from hiatus and boy am I glad to see this is resurrected! :D After reading all of your posts... I think my character is going to be the most normal... background-wise XD (hopefully not a bad thing...?)

I'll get her intro up soon. Also, I need a roommate... (* ^ *)
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Actually, never mind. I think I'll sic an NPC into Lyra's room.
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Wakey wakey
And the heart is hard to translate
It has a language of its own
It talks in tongues and quiet sighs,
And prayers and proclamations

-Florence + The Machine (All This and Heaven Too)




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Would it be okay if I joined or is it too late?
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@Stegosaurus No its not too late, go ahead.
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Waiting for Jumpingsheep to post.
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I feel so bad because everyone else is posting and my computer broke so I've only been able to watch from my phone! I'm so sorry! :?
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Anoo... I hope you guys don't mind if I drop Lyra in late for the party... I don't want to write her home --> school scene, so I'll put 'er in sometime after you've all gone a few rounds.
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Warning! Crappy author at work! Any hapless bystanders/passerbys will be sentenced to an eternity of hell by eye-hurt :3




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Can I join or is it too late? :(
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