Indigena 2.0 DT

Hey, so I realized that Madagascar is east of Africa. Would people from North America really travel across the Pacific, Australia and the Indian Ocean to get to Africa, when they could just fly over the Atlantic?

This got me a little bit confused, and I'd appreciate it if any of you could clear it up.

Okay, so, I did NOT expect Summer to die. And I think I'm crying. NO NEED TO WORRY, THOUGH.
Anyways, I don't know what to do with Alaska. At first, I was going to have the guy, or whoever it was behind her, be one of the ones from the camp site, but I don't know. Now that, supposedly, there might be other people on the island then I could do my post now and make it one of those people? Then the person could take her, like they did Blue and (I think) Chris? Or, I think somebody took them. It's what I'm assuming. I don't know. And nobody would even know that she's missing, because she's still in the friggin' forest and nobody's found her. Except for some stranger.

Posting mine in an hour or two when I get back from the dentist.

Timing depends on how much pain they want to inflict on my gums.

Hey, so I just posted. Let me know if you guys like it, or if you're getting some ideas that involve my character.

Oh, I wasn't saying that the island is Madagascar, because as you said, Madagascar is on the other side of Africa. Plus there are civilizations on Madagascar, and it wouldn't really make things scarier if they are on Madagascar. I was thinking it could be an island LIKE Madagascar, but yeah, on the other side of Africa, in the Atlantic ocean. That way we can make up some other animals.

Also, I felt a little ... I dunno, but by putting in animals and describing more of the island, kinda made me feel like I was taking control, and I really don't mean to impose. But anyway, I hope it was adequate, and putting in the beached boat gave more suspense :3

@CandyWizard, I'm gonna try and break up my paragraphs more, thanks for the critique ^^

Oh my gosh, amazing posts!! @Savvy I am definitely going to PM you about this plot twist :3 I have a couple of good ideas, and then once we have one I'll post ^^

@CandyWizard great post ^^ I take it Saph was the blue-eyed girl that Mark slapped in the face?

@Basil Thank you so much! Yes, it was her. She had a "sunburn" later on so I had the idea of telling its origin

@IronSpark I think that what Basil was saying was that the island is LIKE Madagascar, not anywhere near it. Madagascar's on the right side of Africa, to its east, so our characters wouldn't even be flying over it, or its surrounding islands.

@CandyWizard - Yeah, virtualized that after posting and thought I fixed it, but I must have missed something. Will go back and edit that bit out, for consistency.

@IronSpark I missed Quentin! @CandyWizard great first post. I think Mark has a really developed character and will add to the story.

@Shiney Chris wasn't taken; he was just knocked out so he wouldn't follow Saph's kidnappers (or whoever they are). Maybe your guy could be Chris coming back from the hike. If so, he would have to be in a pretty bad mental state from what happened. Do you want to post before me, or do you want me to post first? :3

If anyone wasn't sure my post was open for anyone. So if you want to build off my last one feel free! Also love Quentin he is so awesome!

@Savvy, if you could post first, that'd be absolutely amazing. I donated blood today and they messed up big time, and ended up taking two pints of blood and making me lay down for two and a half hours because I felt awful. But anyways, yeah, if you'd do yours then I'll do mine. Thank you so much.

@CandyWizard no problem ^^ I wonder what will happen when Saph finds out she was slapped in the face tehe >:3

Oh, by the way guys, this is a tenrec, the "rat thing" Saph has on her shoulder :3

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And this is a fossa (Pronounce foosa)

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@Savvy Thanks. I'll do my best to make Mark a good character

@HazelGrace16 I think I might use your character in my next post. Should be fun!

@Basil Guess we'll have to wait and see. And that tenrec is soooo cute!

Haha I know right!! Did the picture of the Fossa come up? It's not working on my computer :/