Great post @Savvy ^^ And you too @Shiny, it was very well done
Dorian, are you the one adding all the spices to our food? Of course I am. Why? Because frankly the food here tastes like poorly cooked sawdust. It genuinely tastes how Solas looks.
Thank you, @Savvy! But yes, she's still with him. I was ATTEMPTING to make it obvious that one of the guys in the group led her back, or whatever, because it's definitely not a good idea for some teenage girl to go wandering off into the forest alone. I'm sorry for not making that more clear! Do you want me to rewrite that part? I wouldn't have a problem doing that.
'we have lingered in the chambers of the sea / by sea-girls wreathed with seaweed red and brown / till human voices wake us, and we drown'
If you want to, you could, but don't worry about it too much! I'll do my best to keep Alaska in character in my next post, by the way. If I write anything that doesn't correspond with her character, then just call me out and I'll change it.
Thanks for clarifying that for me! ^^
"We accept the love we think we deserve." -Stephen Chbosky's Perks of Being a Wallflower
Love your post, @Savvy ^^ I'll have mine up once someone else posts
Dorian, are you the one adding all the spices to our food? Of course I am. Why? Because frankly the food here tastes like poorly cooked sawdust. It genuinely tastes how Solas looks.
