PMD: Seventeen Plates DT

mkay ill be posting later though

@Charizard821, I just realised something:

Riley was sick of this guy. It wasn't that he was wrong, he was simply so annoying. He needed some sense knocked into him.

"I'll teach you not to say everything that comes to your mind!" he yelled, before lunging at Gabriel.

The one moment, Riley only knows that the other Pokémon is a Riolu, the next, he seems to be struck by divine inspiration and knows the Riolu's name is Gabriel.

I realise this is unintentional meta-gaming (meta-gaming = using knowledge gained out of character, in character), but it is nevertheless awkward. Please fix it.

Incorrect. Sorry, Hunter but I have YOU in MY correction list this time. If you'll remember, Gabriel stated his name to Flurry in the hallway before. Thus, Riley does indeed know it.

Also, I recall you telling me to post something, but I just did. It would seem unfair to post twice before you and Buggie have the chance, so I was waiting on you guys. If you want me to post twice though, by all means tell me! However, I think @AstralHunter would be better for the next Gabriel, Riley, Flurry post, as it's kind of his intricate plot that emerges at this point.

verser might post

So I heard.

yeah, realized I just said that XD sorry guys

Plan: I'll break free from the crobat near Mt Providence, then make my way to Flurry, Riley, and Gabriel and lead them, along with Xerneas and Articuno, to The Palace of Flames where Zulu, Ren, and absol will be getting their butts kicked and save them. Absol however, will die. Unless someone wants him to live. If any of you object to this plan i'll change my post.

Wow, I missed quite a lot. Great post by the way @Verser, though I feel I should point out it's Mt. Providence, and the fire plate's location is the Palace of Flames, though those small details aside it was very good. I am indifferent on Absol. He has so many paths in the plot web where he dies, it would take a miracle for him to survive this.

And I think I just may try this Storybook challenge thing.

Oh, woops

ok so heres were I think we goin from here. Verser's splitting off and being taken to Mt Providence. He says he'll break out of prison (with the help of @AstralHunter @Charizard821 @Buggiedude2340 perhaps) and leading you guys to us because were gonna be getting wrecked and Absols gonna die there so :3

Good? Bad? Give me feedback X3

Sorry, @Verser, but there is no way Gabriel, Flurry, or Riley will be able to aid Frost in locating the Fire Plate. As soon as you read my latest post, you will discover why. Unfortunately, that also means they cannot act as reinforcements for Zulu and Ren's party. They won't be able to help anytime soon, actually, since I have already discussed the next few steps in Flurry, Gabriel and Riley's journey with their respective authors.

However, I have a suggestion: Frost can still break free, but instead of going north for assistance, he can free some of the other prisoners. Then you can introduce some more characters and use them in whatever way you like.

@Charizard821, I see what you mean. I must add that Gabriel wouldn't simply mention his name like that and then move on without bothering to hear theirs, so I must request that you remove it (and the subsequent mentions of his name) anyway. And the post for which I was waiting was your latest one. If you understood me differently - or if I was unclear - then I apologise.

@Buggiedude2340, either you or Char could post next, but please take note that Gabriel will be in his room the rest of the day after the fight. Oh, and whoever posts, Flurry or Shaymin should fill Riley in on what Cassandra had said.

Why do I feel like such a wet blanket today?

...Sooooooooooooo.... Mystery Dungeon adventure, huh? Wonder I didn't see that sooner. Okay. So, um, lemme create a character real quick and assuming it will be accepted (or at least I hope so), I'll properly introduce myself here.

Happy new year to all, and until next time...

...Hopefully.

PS: Character completed! Now awaiting approval, as well as this weekend to start posting.
Quite surprising that Deoxys is not on the list. Yes, technically he's not a Legendary, I know, but he kinda counts, I'll miss him Would love to work for him, too.

@AstralHunter, unfortunately I had no real way of determining that other than pure deduction through the character's personality. I will rectify the issue, posthaste. Also, I just read your post. I like how you repeated the fight but in Gabriel's perspective. I also noticed that you changed the wording of a few things, which may be a consistency issue, but I think it fits much more correctly. I only had one issue with it. Riley's personality is very introverted. He's afraid to open up and especially would never reveal any of his feelings in the presence of a stranger like Gabriel. As a result, I ask that you edit the part where Riley reveals why he engaged in the fight. (Trying to impress Flurry.) It seemed like too open thing for him to say when I read it. I hope you understand.