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Hi guys it's Messenger. I'm hungry for reviews, but I'm not always very good at pushing myself to review stuff in the Green Room, so if you want something reviewed it will make me have a deadline.

What I will Review
I will review anything that is not rated 18 for L or M, or is exceeding 2500 words. Sorry, reviews take a while so a large work is a daunting task. I love action/adventure, murder/suspense, and almost anything else besides works that are romance-only. Stories with romance in them are fine, but no Pride and Prejudice. Violence is okay as long as it isn't extremely explicit. Like don't explain to me the entire structure of the man's inside as he gets stabbed.

I am better at reviewing novel chapters than poetry, but I will still try my best if you have a poem you wish reviewed.

Do not ask me to review a chapter if I have not read the previous ones.
I f I jump into a the middle of a story, it makes reviews quite hard. I have to learn characters, sub-plots, main plots, and relationships, all while attempting to give you a good review So if you wish me to review your works,start at THE BEGINNING.

I will attempt to get you your review within 7 days. However, if I get loads and loads of requests it may take longer.After all, I don't live on YWS.
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Well that's a lie . . .


So, request!




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This other Eden.
Hello! Please don't complain about second person... It is on of those mental amnesia type things, like the book Pincher Martin if you have read that.
You know that studded leather armour in films? Nobody wore that. I mean, how would metal studs improve leather armour?




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I'll get to it within the week sir!




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Would love it if you could review my short story Zom-Brawl !

Please and thank you ^-^
Much appreciated :)




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I would greatly appreciate it if you would review my poem...
Past, Present, Future
It's called "Past, Present, Future."




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I forget to say thanks for that review, it was very helpful! Short stories are not my area of expertise. :-)
You know that studded leather armour in films? Nobody wore that. I mean, how would metal studs improve leather armour?




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feel free to review any of my works :) most of them have been reviewed to death but im going to upload the 2nd chapter of the Kingdom Protectors later if you feel like reviewing it :)
~Sun Goddess~




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So so so so so so sorry to bug, but I'm dying to finish the editing stage... and I only have one review XD It's the newest Devil Touch Prologue, I'm on my iPad so it's a little too hard for me to link you. So sorry to bug you DX
Sushi




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Of course @SushiSashimi333 I will get to it tonight!




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Thank you so much!!!! >< m(._.)m
Sushi




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I'm sorry but i had to be unexpectadley whisked away to the store. I'll get it tomorrow.




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Hello messenger, could you please review my story Exam Result
It has got some reviews, if you like it you can review it. Thanks!



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