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by LadyBug in Poetry » Realistic
A kind of loneliness
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mama says the worst is over
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try not to destroy everything you love
by dissonance in Poetry » Realistic
God Hates Hitchhikers
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Reviews » Poetry » Dramatic, Romantic
Circus JesterNice work done by the author (as always). All your poems are just amazing. This whole poem would sound so cool as a rap. "The clowns are doing their job ...
KaavyaK - 23 minutes ago
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Reviews » Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy
The Daughter of War - Chapter 11: The Girl Who Breathed FireHello again! ~ Writing Commentary This is probably one of my favorite chapters so far! It had me hooked from beginning to end! From the anticipation up to the fight ...
goodolnoah - 26 minutes ago
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Reviews » Novel / Chapter » Supernatural, Romantic
Raylen, lonesome and loving vampireA few things: first is formatting feedback. I'd take out the 'chapter x's because the story flows much better without the addition of the titles and honestly, in my experience, ...
DevilBeMyDarling - 31 minutes ago
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Forums » Writers Corner
all my missing pieces or all my hoarded holes05/06/24 everything I see here is just a half-truth. I watch you lunge for the next photo, contorting your people into poses—a hand on a shoulder, mouths gaping with laughter, ...
Hijinks - 34 minutes ago
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Reviews » Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Fantasy
Chapter 1: Noche de las Almas Pasadas. Part 1I read the first paragraph and instantly thought wow. Your use of descriptive language is sooo amazing!!!! The vocabulary, chefs kiss! I mean just take a look at the wording ...
DevilBeMyDarling - 39 minutes ago
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Reviews » Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure
The Daughter of War - Chapter 10: Peach Blush and Obsidian CurlsHello again! ~ Writing Commentary “I see. Well, the other girls are in the powder room to your left, but you may help yourself to any outfits in the dressing ...
goodolnoah - 56 minutes ago
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Forums » Fiction Discussion
What's the best line you've written in a story?He would figure it out eventually; how to find a home.
APoltergeist - 2 hours ago
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Reviews » Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Mystery / Suspense
Taken (revisited and edited)Oh wow! That kind of took me by surprise. Firstly, the tone of the story is amazing! almost feels a little past tense, which adds to the overall impact of ...
DevilBeMyDarling - 2 hours ago
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Reviews » Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Supernatural
Zombies of Mariesville | SevenWhat an empowering story! Your pacing as an author kept me reading, I couldn't look away. The predicament of the characters truly adds to the sense of urgency within the ...
DevilBeMyDarling - 2 hours ago
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Reviews » Poetry » General, Lyrical
God Hates HitchhikersWhat a moving narrative! First off, the title drew me in. Second, the author's use of vocabulary certainly elevated and added to the overall effect quite splendidly. The author's use ...
DevilBeMyDarling - 2 hours ago
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Reviews » Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure
The Daughter of War - Chapter 9: Asclepius’ KeepHello again! ~ Writing Commentary To mirror what Avian said not very long ago, I think I have a new favorite character… I saw on your wall somewhere that you ...
goodolnoah - 3 hours ago
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Reviews » Poetry » Dramatic, Lyrical
Can it be you?heyo! I noticed you review on quite a lot of things. I also noticed that this was a poem and decided to review it once I saw it was you ...
AkiraEliza - 3 hours ago
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Forums » Information Desk
Report a Site BugI got a very minor, but weird bug going on. [pretext: I'm using DuckDuckGo on a laptop with Windows 10. I've already restarted everything, even my wifi router (unintentionally lol), ...
RavenAkuma - 3 hours ago
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Reviews » Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure
The Daughter of War - Chapter 8: Death ReincarnateHello again! ~ Writing Commentary The Valencia Desert was a wide-ranged land filled with hot sand and sun. The sky was a pink hue, with dunes layered as far as ...
goodolnoah - 3 hours ago
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Poetry » Dramatic, Romantic
Circus JesterA sequel to Circus Freak, Circus Rose, Circus Marionette, Circus Petals, and Circus Story.
AkiraEliza - 4 hours ago
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Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy
The Adventures of Rose Hood Chapter 34: To talk to SinAfter Rose wakes up, Sloth is interrogated.
keeperofgaming - 4 hours ago