zsmith

Hey there, So, you have a mostly good writing style, good writing voice, you show the character well through the voice, and you have an interesting and original idea. I ...

Hey there! This was great! Everything flowed naturally, there was great rhythm and rhyme, you even had perfect punctuation - which is so rare to see in most peoples poetry ...

Hey there! I was instantly drawn to this piece by the title - which is rare for me, people rarely come up with a title as poetic as the poem ...

Well, well, this was certainly and interesting piece. And all inspired by a sink in a room? Awesome! You certainly are creative. My main complaint was about your punctuation. The ...

Hey there! I'd like to start by saying you have an interesting story idea here and the main character seems likable so far - which is important, obviously. The one ...

Hey there! This is a good start to something that could be a great poem. As it is now, being so short, it doesn't seem like something that can stand ...

Hey there, Nice poem! Very... gothic/emo? I especially loved the line "The sky is falling, that's what they say"... I felt like there was some story behind that, it was ...

I loved the first stanza! You could do with some punctuation throughout. The last stanza, on the other hand, seemed a little forced and broke the pattern of rhythm and ...

Hey there, This was really good. Usually repetition gets annoying but you did it well. You intrigue the readers at the start and draw them in by describing interesting settings ...

This is great, it has great rhythm and rhyme, and the emotion really comes through in your good word choice. It's really relatable as well. The only thing I can ...