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  • Short Story » Fanfiction, Mystery / Suspense Re: Sheridan Holmes: A Scandel from Buffalo PART 14

    Hello there Willowcutz! :) First of all, hats off to you for your dedication! As a fan of Sherlock, I am very welcoming of Sheridan :D Its really incredible how ...

    Sep 29, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Supernatural Re: New Life (chapter 1)

    Hello there Silverdragon! :) I'm Ziggie and this is my first review on Review Day ;) I read your first chapter and I feel its well written. Your descriptions of ...

    Sep 29, 2013
  • Poetry » Health, Humor Re: The Irony of Health-Food Junkies

    Hello there! :) This was a very entertaining/ sad poem. As a person who's obsessed with eating right and exercise, this poem kind of pokes fun at it all. The ...

    Aug 25, 2013
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Romantic Re: To Wish Upon a Hope

    Hello there! :) I'm not much of a poetry reviewer anymore but I'll try my best. This a very sweet poem. It brings a sense of magic in my mind, ...

    Aug 25, 2013
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Mystery / Suspense Re: Laura and the Oak tree

    Hello there! This is a very creative story line. I honestly didn't expect this when I saw the title. I really liked how you described this scenario. Towards the end ...

    Aug 25, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Mystery / Suspense Re: Introducing /start of a novel.

    Hello there! EloquentDragon has given you an awesome review, and I agree with most of it. First of all your writing is just amazing. The imagery throughout the whole piece ...

    Aug 25, 2013
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Spiritual Re: And In The End There Is Silence

    Hey there evie! :) Welcome to YWS! It's nice to see that you've done quite a number of reviews already. This was a very interesting read. It's a very unique ...

    Aug 7, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Fantasy Re: Revenant - Prologue and Chapter 1

    Hey there! :) I'll start with a couple minor corrections. Bright colours of light flashed before my eyes and it made head spin. I took my knife carefully from my ...

    Aug 3, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: The Spark

    Hey Arctic! I'm a tad late for this one, but I'll try my best not to repeat anything. Also, I'm not a poet myself! I'll try to be as helpful ...

    Jul 21, 2013
  • Short Story » Other, Narrative Re: The Sunset Cemetery

    Hey there! This is officially my first review in like a year, so I hope I'm not so rusty to the YWS ways! :p You might be able to think ...

    Mar 29, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Inferno Chapter 1

    Hello there :) Kafka ha already given you a good review so I'll just add on to it I guess. So generally, first impression of this chapter was that I ...

    Dec 10, 2011
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: Drying blood has been taken down

    Hello there :) Whew, I finally made it. Everything, combined with a sick computer has just thrown me off track, but I'm here. After reading that story you sent me, ...

    Dec 4, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Cold School Chapter 1

    Hello there :) I'll begin with the nitpicks With all the girls it wasn't so bad but all my former guys friends would harrass me daily. Okay, I think that's ...

    Dec 2, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: Love & War

    Hello there :) I'll start off with the nitpicks. These days, the comments just tended to roll off me. ...or nitpick, anyway! So I found this story rather cute and ...

    Dec 2, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: The Blob

    Hello there :) Looks like you haven't had any reviews done yet, so get reviewing ;) So this is an interesting story and concept, but I found there is more ...

    Dec 2, 2011


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