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  • Short Story » Fanfiction, Mystery / Suspense Re: Sheridan Holmes: A Scandel from Buffalo PART 14

    Hello there Willowcutz! :) First of all, hats off to you for your dedication! As a fan of Sherlock, I am very welcoming of Sheridan :D Its really incredible how ...

    Sep 29, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Supernatural Re: New Life (chapter 1)

    Hello there Silverdragon! :) I'm Ziggie and this is my first review on Review Day ;) I read your first chapter and I feel its well written. Your descriptions of ...

    Sep 29, 2013
  • Poetry » Health, Humor Re: The Irony of Health-Food Junkies

    Hello there! :) This was a very entertaining/ sad poem. As a person who's obsessed with eating right and exercise, this poem kind of pokes fun at it all. The ...

    Aug 25, 2013
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Romantic Re: To Wish Upon a Hope

    Hello there! :) I'm not much of a poetry reviewer anymore but I'll try my best. This a very sweet poem. It brings a sense of magic in my mind, ...

    Aug 25, 2013
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Mystery / Suspense Re: Laura and the Oak tree

    Hello there! This is a very creative story line. I honestly didn't expect this when I saw the title. I really liked how you described this scenario. Towards the end ...

    Aug 25, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Mystery / Suspense Re: Introducing /start of a novel.

    Hello there! EloquentDragon has given you an awesome review, and I agree with most of it. First of all your writing is just amazing. The imagery throughout the whole piece ...

    Aug 25, 2013
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Spiritual Re: And In The End There Is Silence

    Hey there evie! :) Welcome to YWS! It's nice to see that you've done quite a number of reviews already. This was a very interesting read. It's a very unique ...

    Aug 7, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Fantasy Re: Revenant - Prologue and Chapter 1

    Hey there! :) I'll start with a couple minor corrections. Bright colours of light flashed before my eyes and it made head spin. I took my knife carefully from my ...

    Aug 3, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: The Spark

    Hey Arctic! I'm a tad late for this one, but I'll try my best not to repeat anything. Also, I'm not a poet myself! I'll try to be as helpful ...

    Jul 21, 2013
  • Short Story » Other, Narrative Re: The Sunset Cemetery

    Hey there! This is officially my first review in like a year, so I hope I'm not so rusty to the YWS ways! :p You might be able to think ...

    Mar 29, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Inferno Chapter 1

    Hello there :) Kafka ha already given you a good review so I'll just add on to it I guess. So generally, first impression of this chapter was that I ...

    Dec 10, 2011
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: Drying blood has been taken down

    Hello there :) Whew, I finally made it. Everything, combined with a sick computer has just thrown me off track, but I'm here. After reading that story you sent me, ...

    Dec 4, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Cold School Chapter 1

    Hello there :) I'll begin with the nitpicks With all the girls it wasn't so bad but all my former guys friends would harrass me daily. Okay, I think that's ...

    Dec 2, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: Love & War

    Hello there :) I'll start off with the nitpicks. These days, the comments just tended to roll off me. ...or nitpick, anyway! So I found this story rather cute and ...

    Dec 2, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: The Blob

    Hello there :) Looks like you haven't had any reviews done yet, so get reviewing ;) So this is an interesting story and concept, but I found there is more ...

    Dec 2, 2011


"The trouble with Borrowing another mind was, you always felt out of place when you got back to your own body, and Granny was the first person ever to read the mind of a building. Now she was feeling big and gritty and full of passages. 'Are you all right?' Granny nodded, and opened her windows. She extended her east and west wings and tried to concentrate on the tiny cup held in her pillars."
— Terry Pratchett, Discworld: Equal Rites