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Re: Sheridan Holmes: A Scandel from Buffalo PART 14
Hello there Willowcutz! :) First of all, hats off to you for your dedication! As a fan of Sherlock, I am very welcoming of Sheridan :D Its really incredible how ...
Sep 29, 2013 -
Re: New Life (chapter 1)
Hello there Silverdragon! :) I'm Ziggie and this is my first review on Review Day ;) I read your first chapter and I feel its well written. Your descriptions of ...
Sep 29, 2013 -
Re: The Irony of Health-Food Junkies
Hello there! :) This was a very entertaining/ sad poem. As a person who's obsessed with eating right and exercise, this poem kind of pokes fun at it all. The ...
Aug 25, 2013 -
Re: To Wish Upon a Hope
Hello there! :) I'm not much of a poetry reviewer anymore but I'll try my best. This a very sweet poem. It brings a sense of magic in my mind, ...
Aug 25, 2013 -
Re: Laura and the Oak tree
Hello there! This is a very creative story line. I honestly didn't expect this when I saw the title. I really liked how you described this scenario. Towards the end ...
Aug 25, 2013 -
Re: Introducing /start of a novel.
Hello there! EloquentDragon has given you an awesome review, and I agree with most of it. First of all your writing is just amazing. The imagery throughout the whole piece ...
Aug 25, 2013 -
Re: And In The End There Is Silence
Hey there evie! :) Welcome to YWS! It's nice to see that you've done quite a number of reviews already. This was a very interesting read. It's a very unique ...
Aug 7, 2013 -
Re: Revenant - Prologue and Chapter 1
Hey there! :) I'll start with a couple minor corrections. Bright colours of light flashed before my eyes and it made head spin. I took my knife carefully from my ...
Aug 3, 2013 -
Re: The Spark
Hey Arctic! I'm a tad late for this one, but I'll try my best not to repeat anything. Also, I'm not a poet myself! I'll try to be as helpful ...
Jul 21, 2013 -
Re: The Sunset Cemetery
Hey there! This is officially my first review in like a year, so I hope I'm not so rusty to the YWS ways! :p You might be able to think ...
Mar 29, 2013 -
Re: Inferno Chapter 1
Hello there :) Kafka ha already given you a good review so I'll just add on to it I guess. So generally, first impression of this chapter was that I ...
Dec 10, 2011 -
Re: Drying blood has been taken down
Hello there :) Whew, I finally made it. Everything, combined with a sick computer has just thrown me off track, but I'm here. After reading that story you sent me, ...
Dec 4, 2011 -
Re: Cold School Chapter 1
Hello there :) I'll begin with the nitpicks With all the girls it wasn't so bad but all my former guys friends would harrass me daily. Okay, I think that's ...
Dec 2, 2011 -
Re: Love & War
Hello there :) I'll start off with the nitpicks. These days, the comments just tended to roll off me. ...or nitpick, anyway! So I found this story rather cute and ...
Dec 2, 2011 -
Re: The Blob
Hello there :) Looks like you haven't had any reviews done yet, so get reviewing ;) So this is an interesting story and concept, but I found there is more ...
Dec 2, 2011
