zero_motovation

Awsome use of song lyrics!! I found Linkin Park's "Hands Held High" just reading through it. (i love that song) I bet there are more lyrics from songs I know ...

Hehe. Sounds like I did pretty good for being doped up on my medications (I nearly have pnemonia... :? not fun...) Thanks for the suggestions!! Time to revise!! :wink: ~Zero ...

I liked it. The dialog flowed nicely and seemed natural. The description was good too-- just enough to paint a picture and not so much that I was drowning in ...