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I really like the short, sweet, but descriptive nature of these two poems. It leaves a strong impression on the reader while ensuring that the main ideas don't get lost ...

I really like how the repetition of "Pen pricks", as well as the rhyming scheme, accentuates the rhythm of this poem. The poem is simple, but powerful, and I think ...

I really like the rhythm to this poem! It's a great start, and with a few more stanzas (there is plenty of unfairness to lament about), this poem could become ...