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Im reading this in the middle of a snowstorm! Man, what fascinating short. I especially like the way the manipulation of tension through the use of the comments on the ...

Instead of writing this as a hypothetical why don't you wright it as an actual story? It would be fascinating. All and all the story is a good one, humous ...

I hope her name is this foreshadows her personality and how she faces hardships. "a driving wind, a tempest that was known for rising up out of nowhere and destroying ...

Metaphorical masterpiece. Though I'm unsure of whether is describing a hangover, the need to smoke, drugs, schizophrenia, or all of the above. Eather way it does an amazing job of ...

Please note, I'm not editor or expert I love the detailed fight scene. It adds a baseline for her skills to improve in future stories. I notice some missing commas. ...