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  • Poetry » Lyrical, Realistic Re: What I could never say.

    I will look for you in every man I meet... This line says it all for me. It's the hardest of things when you feel love slipping through your fingertips, ...

    Apr 23, 2025
  • Poetry » Realistic, Humor Re: birds

    The mention of varying birds here and the word play on aviation made this quite a fun read. It's very interesting tune with nature, and the interaction of the creature ...

    Apr 23, 2025
  • Poetry » Realistic, Realistic Re: The Wildfires

    This takes me back to reading Robert Frost's opinions on fire in his poen Fire and Ice. Fire destroys everything in its path, but rebirth is so evergreen. It is ...

    Apr 23, 2025
  • Poetry » General, Lyrical Re: Desolate

    I really like the play on rusty hinges, dust on the floor, empty chambers and silent halls. These are all very particular metaphors for an abandoned heart that provide much ...

    Apr 23, 2025
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Literature Re: The Dress

    A dress weaved from the finest silk of nothing, wearing these garments to fit the loss of each memory you hold dear (a million death days). The metaphors are quite ...

    Apr 23, 2025


Writing is the geometry of the soul.
— Plato