youngwolf1105

thanks for the advice, i don't always have that problem. This is the shortest prologue i've ever written.... scratch that, it's not!

i know it's really short, but i like to make it really mysterious. i'm working on typing out the 1st chapter!

This in only a little bit. I'd decided to break this apart from the 1st Chapter.

wow, i like this. but you're gonna have to watch it to make sure you don't lead off to another direction

i wouldn't recomend going into it so quickly, but i think it's really good! maybe revise it just a little to give more of a background to Sre.