younglover

It seems like it could be a could part but not a good poem. It needs a lot more added to it. I wanna know who what where when why ...

I like the feeling and the passion you expound in this piece. The mood of the poem is very strongly suggested and it makes reading it a whole lot more ...

I do agree it is much more of a Philosofic thought than dramatic poetry. It is overall good though. If you would like to keep it upon this section though ...

I am actually aware of these and have been to multiple. I do really enjoy the poem though. It has strong adjectives in it that really make the poem what ...