youngdreamer

Thank you for all the helpful advice! I was kind of alluding to the biblical narrow path by saying "narrow standards" but I can see how that was easily confusing.

ohhh ok thank you for the explanation..I sorta get it :)

Thank you for the suggestion...some of my lines were def err inconsistent Honestly...I was generally referring to any sin or vice one could become addicted to due to media desensitization, ...

Aww thanks! appreciate it!

First and foremost, I must say I LOVE your suggestion to make the structure into the shape of an I! So creative....I'll def have to experiment with that later 🤭 ...

yeah I was wondering how other people viewed it, bc for some reason I felt like I had such a comparatively weird view/notion of it Also Ik it's ironic I'm ...

"though after a while I de-convinced myself" 😂😂 No but seriously you have complete freedom to choose which form you want...UNTILLL it comes down to poetry that is jkjk :)

thank youuu! I'm not sure how many others feel the same way but I was eager to publish it :) Also welcome to yws!!

I can relate! I'm only in high school and already feeling a bit burnt out by the grind, but I've found that having gratitude can help a lot :D

I appreciate it & I know the poem's viewpoint is kinda limited to what I know about the standard work-day schedule in the few countries I've been to so it'd ...

Awww this poem isn't that great but I'm so happy about that :)!!

Thanks for the review cherie, & you hit the theme right on the spot, what you said was precisely what I was going for!

Hello Hop and thanks for the review!

Hello Lizzy, I have only been once but I will try to write more about it in the future Godwilling! Thanks for your comments!

Yes personally I agree that a country's own citizens should be its first priority, of course under reasonable/appropriate circumstances! Thanks for dropping by