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Re: Rewrite The World
Very nice poem. You used lots of good similes, wording, and language. Everything is perfect except for one thing. I think the rhythm could be a little more exact, which ...
Oct 29, 2020 -
Re: Ride
Hi! I love this mysterious story! It seemed very vague and I don't know if it was your intention. If it was your intention, I think you still have to ...
Oct 28, 2020 -
Re: The Scarlet Demon
Hi! I came across this story and it seemed interesting, so I'll leave a review. "Dear children, gather around, and heed my warning of woe. There is a demon out ...
Oct 28, 2020 -
Re: bewitched
Hi! I saw this story in the horror section and I needed to read it. It was very, very good. I loved this story so much. I have a few ...
Oct 28, 2020
