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yoshikrab

when life gives you lemons . . . i don't know . . . i don't like lemons

  • Poetry » Realistic, Narrative Re: Rewrite The World

    Very nice poem. You used lots of good similes, wording, and language. Everything is perfect except for one thing. I think the rhythm could be a little more exact, which ...

    Oct 29, 2020
  • Art » Dramatic, General Re: Ride

    Hi! I love this mysterious story! It seemed very vague and I don't know if it was your intention. If it was your intention, I think you still have to ...

    Oct 28, 2020
  • Short Story » Humor, Humor Re: The Scarlet Demon

    Hi! I came across this story and it seemed interesting, so I'll leave a review. "Dear children, gather around, and heed my warning of woe. There is a demon out ...

    Oct 28, 2020
  • Short Story » Horror, Romantic Re: bewitched

    Hi! I saw this story in the horror section and I needed to read it. It was very, very good. I loved this story so much. I have a few ...

    Oct 28, 2020


There are those who say that life is like a book, with chapters for each event in your life and a limited number of pages on which you can spend your time. But I prefer to think that a book is like a life, particularly a good one, which is well to worth staying up all night to finish.
— Lemony Snicket