yoha_ahoy

Naughty, naughty... *tsk tsk tsk*

I really liked this. I went to camp this summer and I had that very feeling you express in this poem. I read it and it was like it was ...

I like it. It's short and it seems to me as if you jusr wrote it for yourself which gives it a bit a mystery in my eyes. It makes ...

I'm a very simple person so I like to keep my poems simple. I understand that it may be too simple for some people but that's just how I write. ...

I like this too. Its... interesting, but I like it. I don't know how to describe how it makes me feel. Again, interesting... hmmm.

BAM! A sort of slap in the face there. A dark mood, and it seems like you were angry when you wrote this. No complaints here.

I agree with Snoink about that part there. It does change suddenly and it caught me off guard. It's a very sweet peom though, and I personally like the repetition, ...

Hehehe... brother's don't you just love them? Ramblings are fine, I ramble a lot. I liked it. It speaks to me... having a brother myself. Annoying brothers grrr....