yizhongt

Thanks so much for your feedback Megrim! Really appreciate it. I'll try my best to do what you have suggested. On a separate note, could you please review: Thanks in ...

Thanks for the review and the suggestions. Will get to correcting them as soon as possible.

Thanks for the review and the suggestions. Will get to correcting them as soon as possible.

Thanks for the review! Just letting you know that it was helpful. I'll be making the changes you suggested I do.

Thanks for the review. Will definitely correct the part with the two doings back to back. Just for your information, I've already uploaded the second chapter.

Thanks for the review and the kind words. I really appreciate it. I'll be uploading the next chapter pretty soon. Will let you know.

Hey there, yizhongt here to leave a review. Let me just start by saying that I enjoyed this piece. The story flowed well and was action packed. The descriptions you ...

Thanks for the review! Greatly appreciate it. If you have the time, could you please review Part III? I just uploaded it. Thanks in advance!

Thanks for the review! And don't worry about it. If you could review the next chapter as well, it would be awesome. Thanks again for the review.

Don't worry about it. Take your time.

Hey, I just updated the story with Chapter 5 (Part I). Would be really nice if you could give it a review and find all my errors. Thanks in advance!

Hey, just letting you know that I've uploaded Chapter 5 (part I). Feel free to check it out and leave a comment if you have the time.

It's not a fan fiction, but I drew inspiration from sources lkme Star Wars, the green lantern corps%uFF0C mass effect and Harry Potter.

Thanks for the review! Much appreciated. Will be updating the story soon.

Thanks for the review @AnnGrace. Do let me know when the next chapters of A New Ally or A Lost Hope comes out.