yamatri

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this is really mysterious man , I am really still guessing who the speaker is :

thanks u I am really glad you liked it.

thank u I am glad you liked it , I will definitely work on the last 2nd stanza , , the stranger is the person we become when we go ...

thank u very much, your review helped me a lot in understanding my lack. i will definitely work on the things you said

"The moment brings a memory, fading in - a sudden thought. Then time stood still, I get a chill, thinking of things I wish I forgot." fading in means gradually ...

thanq very much :-)

thanq for taking time to give in-depth review, for the capitalization of letter you are right I wanted people to know it was not a sweet simple feeling of nostalgia ...

I will work on the emotion part, this poem kind of came out in one breath and I wrote it without altering much, I think the lack of emotion is ...