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'Ay, review tiime Well, to begin with, I did like how you portrayed fire. Destructive, beautiful, and dangerous. You used a common theme but still made it unique to you ...

'Ayyy, review time c: Wonderful job with the stanza rhythm and the rhyming in general. The lines seemed to fit together, there were no awkward gaps [that I could detect] ...

Roses, yessss. I love roses, they're probably one of my favorite flowers. It was nice to see a poem about them! It's simplistic and provides a different view on how ...

'Allo Taha c: I like the feel of this a lot! It almost gives off a sleepy and subdued feel, venturing to almost nostalgic, which again, I like. The poem ...