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Wow, I really enjoyed this poem. :) It's powerful and interesting. The images you've painted are quite vivid and in all honesty I can't find a thing wrong with it. ...

The annual Festival of Magic would have been held that last week of July, but unfortunately, for nearly the last century the festival has not been held; it shall not ...

Pretty good. I think it might have been a bit more organized if you broke it into stanzas here and there but I did like it overall. The rhyming seems ...

I liked this poem. :) The repetition was well done and adds to the feel of the poem. I'm torn between the last and third last stanzas as my favorites. ...

Well. Overall, this wasn't bad but there is a lot of work you need to do. I've only posted a few of the run-ons that need to be corrected. I ...

I wonder why I cry sometimes (This line made me wonder... if you explain it in the next two lines, you don't need this one... Maybe change it from a ...

This is depressing so far, but well written. I like the way you opened the story; it was just what you needed to draw readers in. Just out of curiosity, ...

xD This was definitely entertaining, very well written. I'm sure writer's block will go running from you, now. I did find a few small mistakes here and there... That's much ...