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This poem kind of overwhelmed me, although I found a lot of great imagery in it. I liked your rhyme scheme, but I didn't exactly understand your poem at all. ...

I felt as though this poem was very powerful, and I think that a few of the devices that you used in it contributed, including the irregular rhyme scheme. I ...

I thought that this was amazing, and I can totally relate. But some of the lines seemed like they were only there because they had to rhyme. Other than that, ...