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Hi there! Lisa here for a review. I've spotted a few mistakes, mostly typos, so you should get back and re-check on that one. Other than that, it might take ...

Hello there! I'm here for another review. I've been loving the past chapters. The storyline is really intriguing. "Hi." she soon says." The full stop before the quotation mark should ...

Hi there! I've got your message and I'd just like to leave a kind review. First of all, this story is indeed well done. -applause- "To burn the wasted time, ...

This is amazing! Marvelous! Simply beautiful! I can see how well this relates to life, when being compared to reality, but I'm not quite sure whether you were intending to ...

Hi there! I'd just like to go all out and honestly say that this is a beautiful piece of work. I love your descriptions, especially how you described the face ...

Hi there! Lisa here for a review. There are quite a few errors that I'd like to point out. I've noticed that there was no space after the full stop. ...

Hello there! Lisa here. I'm just here to drop by for a short review, nothing much. I honestly love this story. You can definitely write action scenes. And I didn't ...

Hi there! Lisa here. Before I start, I have to say that I haven't read the earlier chapters, which I am going to do so now. ^-^ Firstly, I'd like ...

Hi there! Lisa here. I've read your first chapter and I have to say that I love where you're going with the story. The cliffhanger at the end would make ...

Hello there! I was just browsing through your poetry section and I came across this. All I have to say is that it's just incredible. It blew me away. Although ...

This is really good! I love how you describe the scene, it's marvelous. I can't afford to give any corrections, but it might take a more experienced writer to do ...

Haha this poem is indeed clever! Really nice work. It kept me reading but I have to say that "You have stuck with this thing." was not one of the ...

I AM COMPLETELY AMAZED. As far as I could see, there was no grammar or punctuation mistakes at all, but it might take a more experienced writer to have given ...

I've noticed a few punctuation mistakes in your dialogues. You should add a comma at the end of a dialogue before the quotation marks. Also, when you start a dialogue, ...