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Like everyone else, this story was chilling. I liked how you told it though. Writing from the point of view of a little kid brought such pure and innocence to ...

Hey there, I LOVE this story. It was really cute and the way you told it did switch between tenses but it was very good. Your descriptions were beautiful, especially ...

Hi, I really like your story and the idea. There are a few mistakes throughout it but overall I loved reading it. In a couple of sentences, make sure to ...

I really love this poem! The way you told it was really cool and it was fun to read. The first stanza has a little uneven flow. Like they said ...

This piece is really good. You describe everything so well and it created an imagine in my mind. The story sent emotions that were sort of mixed and that's what ...

I love how you kept the same poem but from two different perspectives. In the third stanza, you could add more detail but I like how you don't know exactly ...