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Re: Vision
I like this poem a lot, and I love the feeling of it in all, but there's one thing that is really bugging me. The first half of the poem ...
Oct 4, 2009 -
Re: Granddad Dying
I agree with what With or Without You said, that the title is good as is, and it's very mysterious, but I think you could definitely expand successfully. Add a ...
Sep 28, 2009 -
Re: -Inconcessus- One
ok, id din't actually read anyone elses reviews here (there are a lot of them, ok?) but at one part (im too lazy to find it right now) you said ...
Apr 24, 2009 -
Re: -Inconcessus- Preface
0.0 woooooow....... I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! o my god, that was AMAZING!way awesome story. I cant wait to get to the next chapter. And ya know what rocks? my middle name ...
Apr 5, 2009 -
Re: Starlight Requiem {Chapter Two}
Ok, I'm reviewing this. It's pretty good, but there are a few grammar/spelling mistakes, and you use the word impatient several times in the beginning. You might want to change ...
Apr 4, 2009