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I'd no idea how long I had been on Earth. When I woke, I knew three things. I was freezing, naked and in excruciating pain I knew nothing of my ...

Hey! :D Sorry if I'm late to your request. I saw in your portfolio that I also read your Nathaniel Stone novel, so I'm excited to see what your new ...

I found myself almost dragging my feet once lunch time rolled around. Picking up my backpack, I looked over at the open classroom door. Over it sounds like you repeat ...

Chapter 5!! Woohoo! Vanessa eyed him with intrigue, like a child seeing the sun for the very first time. He was by all means, beautiful, flawlessly beautiful. His face was ...

“It is easier for a camel to go through the eye of a needle, than for a rich man to enter the kingdom of God” Again, like I’ve mentioned in ...

Hey-O. Glad to see you're writing more :) I'll try to be as helpful as I can! Weeping may endure for a night, but joy cometh in the morning. Psalms ...

... The cattle had frozen to death, probably during the night. Louis looked over their scrawny carcasses. It was a wonder that they had survived to adulthood. He raised his ...

Gah! I'm falling to far behind in this story! Anyways, onto the review. So I liked this version much more than your other one. All in all, it just had ...

Hiya! :D I really like this so far. It was very smooth from beginning to end; I didn’t get bored, and I wasn’t distracted by bad grammar or anything, so ...

Hiya! “What do you mean, ‘they escaped?’” Mr. Collins’ eyes grew wide. IT would be easier to read if you wrote dialogue tags. It was confusing for the first bit ...

Hiya! My body ached all over, but regardless I just kept running. I didn't know what was following me comma but from the glimpse that I caught of it the ...

Hiya! A sly smile drew on her face as the unfortunate man's yellings faded behind her, and as she tucked her newfound wealth beneath her cloak while squeezing it in ...

Hiya Kladi! :D Tiny particles danced around her in the light as her silvery-blue flank rose and fell heavily .Particles of what? You should explain. Dust, water, dirt... Overall, a ...

Hey there :D Amazing job, really! You have a wonderful way of describing things that is so original. Your pace is slow, and I actually really like it. I don’t ...

Hiya The brute turned his head, not moving his feet. He was trying not to display a weakness, Aleck assumed; but that was as good as broadcasting it. His vision ...