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Re: KILL (part II)--contest entry
Hey!! I'm back for part 2 :D Ok, so I couldn't find any major errors so no nitpicks this time ^_^ I ended this story with a lot of questions.... ...
Jun 26, 2011 -
Re: KILL--contest entry
Safe inside the shadowed foyer of a nameless, shabby hotel, Shannon ran his hands through his dark curls and panted, cheeks ruddy and a gloss of sweat glittering on his ...
Jun 26, 2011 -
Re: Deleted
Light shown shone through the cracks in the barn's skeleton, illuminating the empty crates and smashed barrels that littered the floor. He could hear glass shatter and heard furniture breaking. ...
Jun 24, 2011 -
Re: Understanding in a car crash.
Today was the day I died, the final day of my sordid little life yet the beginning of something new. I know what you’re thinking; the pain, the agony, my ...
Jun 24, 2011 -
Re: Eating for Two
This is a short story I conceived of just today. I feel so sad every time I hear about a relationship ending this way, or in a similar way, and ...
Jun 24, 2011 -
Re: Button Man's Jazz - Chapter Two
It wasn’t Virgil’s snoring that kept Harmony awake every night. Although he was startled the first few nights he’d moved in with the man when he heard the loud vibrations, ...
Jun 18, 2011 -
Re: 1.1 | The Girl in the White Box
1 | The Girl in the White Box The crackling static filled the room, waking the girl from a deep sleep. She rolled over in her cot with an annoyed ...
Jun 18, 2011 -
Re: Alchemists 2: Spirit, Mind, Shadow and a lot of Water
Chapter Two: Food By the lakeside Technically, I think it’s “Food by the Lakeside” Felicity, Cameron comma and Jason left the school and headed to the local take-out shop which ...
Jun 18, 2011 -
Re: Alchemists 1: History
Chapter One: History Felicity Weather-Spoon stared blankly at the white board at the front of the room. The teacher looked just as bored as she felt. She sighed and rested ...
Jun 18, 2011 -
Re: Alchemists
Prologue: Guardians Tale Midnight, Brisbane City. The skyscrapers glittered as they reflected the light coming from the cars and shops below. Standing on top of a skyscraper was were three ...
Jun 18, 2011 -
Re: Nefarious Purposes 2
Chapter 2 I plop down on my bed and let out a groan. “Why?” I exclaim to the heavens. “Why me?” “Come on now,” my best friend Bethany chimes in ...
Jun 18, 2011 -
Re: Nefarious Purposes 1
Chapter One “Psst…” “Ugh.” I grunt in protest. “Psst…Cantaloupe!” A finger pokes me in the side. “Ugh-nuhhh!” I roll over as best as I can in the back seat, trying ...
Jun 18, 2011 -
Re: Blur the Lines - Part One - Chapters 7 - 9
CHAPTER SEVEN Michael Haley walked into his house like a man on a mission, which technically he was. His job had just become exponentially harder, all because of the impatience ...
Jun 18, 2011 -
Re: Blur the Lines - Part One - Chapters 4 - 6
CHAPTER FOUR The jagged peaks of the Himalayas sliced through the thick layer of clouds like shears through a sheep’s fluffed wool, piercing the placid sky above. Snow coated their ...
Jun 18, 2011 -
Re: Soliloquy #1: Is This Me?
lol, how can I start this review? I originally typed 'this is cool' but then I remembered the first part of the soliloquy x) So I'm actually at a loss ...
Jun 18, 2011
