xMidnightx

I know you were probably hoping for a way to improve, but everything was great. You had great descriptions such as 'scratchy paper voices', 'like clowns on tightropes', and 'floating ...

Hello, as others mentioned above, you don't have a set topic. Its a bit confusing because you jump from one thing to a next. From a house to dog, which ...

Linder cranes her long neck around and looks over her new armour. It's armor. The training camps are (In my opinion) the best place in the world. I don't think ...