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This poem reaches for so many different things, and falls short on almost every one of them. I'm really not sure how that happened. Nothing in this poem matches up ...

The lyrics don't seem too personal. Yes you mention the feelings, but they don't seem deep enough to be personal, granted this was written on a whim. I suggest trying ...

Usually, I hate Haikus. However, yours is full of pulchritude. I do really love the visual imagery in this one. It's so gentle, but for something in such a small ...

I applaud your geekiness. This is truly a very amusing piece of work, I was smiling the whole time. I liked this. However, it wasn't too visual so... 4/5

Oh my shenanigans! I love this. The analogies are gorgeous. The writing is fluid. And best of all, you have a very mature voice that only makes this piece of ...

Thank you for the input. ^^

This is absolutely beautiful. The Greek references take my breath away. The descriptions allow me to visualize, rather than just read aimlessly. It gets me to think. It's all around ...