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Hey =] I thought I'd take a look at your story as you reviewed mine :) Nit-piks first - though most seem to have already been covered so I'll try ...

Hey Evi =] I really enjoyed reading this :D You definitely succeeded in giving me goosebumps! It flowed really well and you managed to keep the suspense from start to ...

Hey again =] I really enjoyed this! I still love your writing style and I think the piece flowed really well. I still feel so sorry for Mariadelle, but I'm ...

Hey again =] Wow - I really loved this part :D I couldn't really spot any nik-piks but that might have been because I was so immersed in the story ...

Hey =] Wow - I really enjoyed reading this! It took me awhile to get into it, but before I knew it I was finished reading the whole piece - ...

Hey Erica =] I'm not very good at writing or reviewing poetry so I'll just give my thoughts. I think the poem was very well written and you used a ...

Hey =] I'm back again. Nit-piks; I grabbed the Sasha - I'd take out 'the' moments ago - 'moments before' would sound better. Thalia saw me and, her eyebrows once ...

Hey =] This was interesting and I'd like to read more. Like Rosey, I like the way you shaped the relationship between Evie and her sister. The behaviour and dialogue ...

Hey =] Wow, I loved this part. I totally didn't see that coming! I love the idea of keeping Holly in the story and combining her with Esmerald. I know ...

Hey =] I said I'd be here and here I am! Nit-piks first; That morning I was more nervous then I ever had been in my whole life. - I'd ...

Hey, I'm back =] Aww I'm so glad Cassie got in, Cecelia deserves the competition - it's annoying how some people just seem to get everything in life. Nit-piks; There ...

Hey KJ =] Thanks for the PM! I really liked this part. The last part helped us to explore the relationship between Autumn and her Mum and I think the ...

Hey Colleen =] Wow, you have so many different ideas for stories! I find it hard to stick to one idea too - that's how my third story 'Imo' came ...

Hey =] Thanks for the PM! Most of the nit-piking seems to have been done already so I'll just review the story line. I definitely think this part has helped ...

Hey =] I really enjoyed 'Jinx' too! Like 'queenb4ever,' it's the only Meg Cabot book I've ever read, but after reading 'Jinx' a couple of months ago, I'd definitely consider ...