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Hey there Audrey! The title of this drew me in - it reminded me of the film of the same name :) So, I didn't spot that many grammatical mistakes, ...

Hey Crafty! I'm gonnna go ahead and call you that, okay? :) So, I was thinking about entering this contest, but I haven't been able to think up anything to ...

Hey BrooklynWriter! I really enjoyed reading this. I have a feeling I know where this might be heading, but the way you write has me wanting to read on, despite ...

Hey VousEsEtonnant! I'm here as requested. I would have posted it sooner, but YWS suddenly stopped working on me and then it crashed and only saved the first part of ...

Hey! I loved this film too! I saw it a couple of weeks back and I can say it's the funniest film I've seen in a while. This review was ...

Hey Teardrop! I saw that this was featured - congrats on that - so I'm here to review this for you :) I did notice a few nit-piks, so I'm ...

Hey there! Welcome to YWS! I think you have a good basis for a story here but I did notice a few things that were wrong grammatically. The feelings were ...

Hey Otherone! I wondered if this was based on the song when I saw the title. I'm so glad it is as I absolutely love the song - I've used ...

Hey Skins! Wow - why must you be able to write such awesome novels? *Is jealous* I can't help thinking that all of my novel ideas are sort of the ...

Hey Skins! 1. Nit-piks - grinded my teeth together 'grinded' would sound better as 'ground' the guy’s site 'site' should be 'sight' crumpled five pound not 'not' should be 'note' ...

Hey there! I thought this piece was really amazing. Relatable too. The fight to fit in has become something that almost everyone -save the ones who make the rules - ...

Hey Dreamwalker! I think this is a really interesting piece. It took me a while to get into it, because of the use of dialect, but after a while it ...

Hey there! This was so sad. Not only because the terrible disaster that struck Japan is so fresh in my mind, but because it's so true. So many people have ...

Hey Angela! I'm going to take a look at this for you :) She had been gifted with the thankless task of mopping up the slush of what seemed to ...

Hey there! I thought this piece was beautiful. The descriptions of love were nice and they felt like you were really writing them from the heart :) The piece grew ...