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Hey Elinor! I enjoyed reading this, but I do agree with little tin fish. You seem to have captured the story more in first person than in second, which is ...

Hey Skinsy! The Master of Typos is here ;) I read this a couple of days ago but didn't have time to review - not that you'd have noticed, with ...

Hey there Anime - I'm gonna go ahead and shorten your name for you :P I suddenly remembered that you'd reviewed my contest entry for me, so I thought I'd ...

Hey Cam! I've entered this contest too, so I thought I'd check out your entry to see what I'm up against ;) I like what you have here. It's a ...

Hey Lena! I don't really have anything constructive to say. I just thought I'd read this as it was written by you, and I enjoyed the last piece of yours ...

Hey! Thanks for requesting me to review this and honestly, it's my pleasure. I'm flattered that you think I'm talented, but truthfully, it's you my friend, that are talented. Even ...

Okay, I'm a sucker for your writing. I couldn't not click on this, could I? ;) So, I enjoyed reading this. It kept me on edge throughout - I didn't ...

Hey Skins! I'm back again :) As usual, I really enjoyed reading this. I liked how Charlie finally stood up for himself, but instead of it being all heroic, we ...

Hey Skins! One of the first things I did when I came back on here today was to check whether you'd posted anymore of Stop and Stare and I was ...

Hey there! I did take a quick glance at the other reviews but I'm sorry if I repeat anything. I really enjoyed reading this. The subject matter is sad and ...

Hey there! I agree with the other reviews that some of the dialogue seems a bit forced and awkward. If she really loved him, even though he doesn't love her, ...

Hey IcyFlame! I thought this was so sad. It was full of emotion and you did a good job of getting me to sympathise with the boy. I just wanted ...

Hey Teddy! I didn't catch any mistakes, but then I mostly skim read this as I'm supposed to be packing my room up, instead of on YWS :P I think ...

Hey Skins! I'm finally here to review this for you :) First off, I agree with Ranger Hawk in that I like this much better than them meeting at school. ...

Hey there! This is pretty short, but I liked it. I would suggest that you up the rating though, for your use of a swear word. I did find some ...