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Hey there! I agree with anger. It was a great story, but at times I found myself wondering what was going on. That may have been your intention, but I ...

Hey there! As a start to a story, this isn't too bad. It's left me with lots of unanswered questions, which is good I guess, as it makes me want ...

Hey there! I thought I'd take a look at this for you, seeing as you reviewed something of mine. Now, I'm not at all up to scratch when it comes ...

Hey Jas! There's not much left for me to say that's very constructive, seeing as a lot of other reviewers have given great reviews, so I'm just going to highlight ...

Hey there! I liked this. It was a good piece, full of emotion. But I would like more background. I feel as though, at the moment, I can't sympathise with ...

Hey there! Welcome to YWS! I hope you have an awesome time here :) Now, onto the review. I don't have much to say that hasn't already been said. I ...

Hey there! I agree with the other reviewers in that this is good, for a start, but it could be so much better. The way you describe the emotions are ...

Hey Ranger! I liked the ending - it was nice to see Mud, er, Arianna, get some good fortune. She seemed like a nice enough person, if supposedly ugly and ...

Hey there! I enjoyed reading this. It was sad - the fact that he'd been in an accident and might die before proposing to Annette, but the ending made me ...

Hey Lilicia! I enjoyed reading this. The title caught my attention straight away and I couldn't help clicking to have a read. You do a good job of setting the ...

Hey Skins! I had my eagle eyes searching for typos throughout this, but I kept getting distracted by the story. It's just so darn good. I loved the whole thing ...

Hey there! I think this was a great little story. I liked the way you didn't bow down to stereotypes - you completely changed everything around character-wise, but you still ...

Hey there! As a lot of the other reviewers have already pointed out, I appreciate the humour in this :) It's nice to read a vampire story that isn't oh ...

Hey Hayden! I think this was a wonderful story! Like others have said, the grammar was great and I couldn't find any typos at all, so well done you. I ...

Hey Lena! Thanks for the PM - I'm happy to review anything of yours anytime :) Sorry I'm only just getting to reviewing this - I've had a crappy internet ...