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Hey silent! Here as requested :) So, I think this is my favourite story that I've read by you. It was a really great story and, for something that's sci-fi, ...

Hey there! I think you did a wonderful job on this. You write with such an ease that it makes it a joy to read. None of it comes across ...

Hey Jas! I think this is a great piece. The descriptions were great and, for someone who's never been to NYC, you did a good job of giving me great ...

Hey there silentpages! I think you followed the prompts well. Each character's part was written well and you wrote them in a way that made them sound different fom each ...

Hey there! I think this was a pretty good short story. It flowed nicely and your descriptions were really great too, giving way to beautiful imagery. I could imagine the ...

Hey there Skins! I would have posted sooner, if I'd have known you'd posted this, but I seem to be reviewing less and less these days so I rarely search ...

Hey there tydecker! Thanks for requesting my help :) So, first off I have to say how jealous I am that you've come up with a wonderful entry already. I ...

Hey there silentpages :) As the other reviewers before me have said, I think you've done a good job on this. It flowed well and I didn't spot any grammatical ...

Hey there! Sorry it's taken me a while to get to this. Now, this wasn't a bad piece of writing - you had a plot and two characters that you ...

Hey Azila! It's so nice to read something of yours. I have to say, you write just as well as you review. Maybe even better, if that's possible ;) This ...

Hey there Skins! I'm so glad you posted another part - I feel like I'm addicted to this story :P So, I'm going to try my best to give you ...

Hey there emmy! I think this was great. I didn't spot any mistakes, so good job! I do have one suggestion though - He can do a handstand. 'a handstand' ...

Hey there! I agree with everything that the other reviews have said. This was so simple, sweet and utterly adorable. I loved it! The only thing I'd have to suggest ...

Hey there! I think this piece has real potential. The feelings you described were great - I could really imagine how the girl was feeling. On the down side though, ...

Hey there! I think you have a good piece here. It was grammatically sound and flowed well, keeping me engaged the whole way through. The descriptions you used were great ...