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oneeyedunicornhunter: Thanks for the review. I'll have to check on the tense thing. Um, yeah, this story was a 'stand alone', but I think that any character development I put ...

zaluras: Thanks, I really enjoy Bukowski's work even though I've only one of his books, Post Office. It's an honor that you'd even compare my work to such a great ...

I understand now... Read the Dark Tower Series, it's amazing!

It's pretty good, but not THAT good... Just my opinion.

scribblingquill: Thanks for the review... Yeah I have seen Fight Club, it's probably my favorite movie. Chuck Palahniuk the writer of the book that inspired the movie is amazing, you ...

This was really good. You write with a maturity that I haven't seen very often on this site. Um, but yeah, so, keep up the good work.

Yeah I've heard this book is pretty great... I actually have it on hold at the liabrary right now, I don't know if I'm going to read it or not ...

Hey thanks everyone, I really appreciate the feed back, I will definitely take it into account if I re-write this. To scasha: As much as it may not make sense ...

Wow, your writing is very inticing... great imagery... The only critical response i can think of is that you omit the last sentence... it just seemed out of place to ...

'twas good... I agree with Jamie, the chorus is pretty repetitive. Um yeah good though keep writing.

It sounds like now Paolini is going to be ripping off Greek mythology as well as Starwars/Lotr now...