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I liked the words and the language used. It was amazing beautiful and fantastic all put favorite part was when you wrote.I freeze in the cold north wind, And choke ...

I really liked it. I think that if you made it longer that would be better. I liked how you left the imagination up to the reader. I found no ...

It was really exiting even though it was short. I liked how you left a lot of space left for imagination which is what I think made it scary.I also ...