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This is nicely done. The only thing is that it's kind of confusing what's happening. Also the words "Me" seem misplaced, maybe remove them? Just an idea. Good work, keep ...

Wow, that is beautiful and morbid at the same time. I love it. Great job!! I love the word choice and the imagery it puts off. Keep on writing. =))

Speechless. This poem really spoke to me. Besides the "e" deal, It's close to perfect. Good flow, beautiful words. I really enjoyed. I hope you keep writing more. =) Great ...

Very beautifully put. I love how unique it is compared to most things pieces about stars. --wendy

Thanks for the comment. You're right, it was a bit rushed. It's really just a rough draft. I planned on adding to it and revising, all that jazz. But figured ...