wstoffel101

I like the texture of your piece. One thing I thought didn't fit was or when your tongue magnificently flips. But other then that it's pretty good. I agree with ...

I like how it all flowed together but one part kind of seemed, choppy maybe? I held it in mine, just hoping it might Move. I loved the poem but ...

Wow, beautiful. I loved it. Almost had a tear in my eye honestly. I can kind of relate to Reba, my mother got married four years ago and he is ...

I really enjoyed this! I like the descriptions and the imagery you used in the first paragraph but, keep doing it throughout the entire prologue. It's kind of confusing why ...

This defiantly got my attention, I want to know more! I suggest you elaborate more on the heart condition she has. Explain more about it. Details are the key! Keep ...

I think Rush has potential. Maybe add more details, more ajd, and such, it seems a but bland. Maybe use this as a rough draft and do some revising. I ...