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You've got a great idea here! Although, I do agree with Embee, you need to pace yourself. Really make the reader dislike Melanie and fear Sofia. You have great descriptions ...

An unbelievable turning point in my life…I still couldn’t believe I really accepted the offer to move to a different flat and look after somebody. It’s completely not my style, ...

You're off to a great start! I just have several things I'd like to offer pointers on. I've only reviewed part of your work, but if you like what I've ...

Great idea to make a story about the daughter of spies, instead of the actual spies--very orignal. But when I was reading, I started to wonder...would the daughter of two ...

UHHH! Speechless.... You did an awesome job at drawing me, a reader, in and making me want more, more, more! And to top it off, I don't even have anything ...

Wow! Goosebumps were popping up on my arms! You have a GREAT idea! Definitely take it all the way! One thing I did notice was that your prologue started out ...

This is starting out really great! You've got me curious about the mom, and wondering what's going on that they have to move so much--and about Holly. Keep going! Now ...