writingleos7

Thank you so much for your input!! So the sea part will be explained in the next installment/chapter because it's vital to the story. That's why I wanted to keep ...

Okay thank you so much! I'm going to add some context at the beginning (or maybe end of the piece), and hopefully that will clear it up. Thanks again!!

Omg thank you thank you!!! This really helps and I'm definitely going to look over these fragments because there are specifics I want to emphasize and you're so right that ...

Thank you so much for your feedback! I really appreciate it! Yes I agree with the grammar, word placement fixes lol. Thank you for noting those down, it really helps ...

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Also, one more thing putting it all together like that made it feel so definite and as though the narrator was saying it all in one solid, final breath - ...