writingismylife

Very imaginative and effective. Good use of similes. There are bits where it doesn't flow as well as it perhaps could. Very well written. It creeps into the crevices and ...

Very good! It has good sentiment and meaning and flows well to the tongue. I am impressed! I feel I can relate to it. It's so hard to find poems ...

Very good! Unlike a lot of poems I've read on this site, yours flowed and had good rhythm. I don't have a bad word to say!

I agree with everything ghostie has said. I don't really understand it and don't think it reads like a poem as I like my poems to have rhythm and I ...

Very good technique. I like it. The words flow well and the rhythm doesn't seem forced. I don't agree with hiverious when he says that he finds it a bit ...

It is very well thought out. I liked the last part: "She looked in the mirror at the side of the chapel She smiled She remembered seeing herself In the ...