writerwithacause

This was a very well-written story! Well-detailed, and the grammar was perfect. And I dare to contradict seeminglymeaningless, actually having a description in the beginning (just like you do) works ...

If evening tides could wash away all of your worries, would you let me take your hand and walk you to the ocean shore? My heart feels warm, hot, as ...

I noticed a few people turn to see my outrageous dress. My strange style was always talked about among the women. They thought that women should only wear light and ...

Heya, Julie here to review! :) What do you class as cheating? A simple kiss? A passionate embrace? A lover ' s meeting? All seen as different things to different ...

Uncontrollable, fiery, and painful. I feel good and bad as me and another tear at each other's hearts. Will it ever end? Will I ever be able to dominate the ...

If we were to talk a while , You'd be sure to know That all I want is to see you smile , And for it not to show That ...

I was just going to say what others have already pointed out, to separate into stanzas. xD Here is how I would personally do this: I'm left behind. As you ...

ere tugging impatiently at my duvet with long, narrowed fingers I think that "narrow" should be the word. She had emerald green eyes like a cat and black eyebrows like ...

We see the loss, I agree with what the users above said, "hurt" and "pain" are quite the same thing, so perhaps "loss" or something else would be more suitable. ...

Sun Father began to wonder if there were other beings like him and Moon Mother. This line of thought distressed Moon Mother, and she asked Sun Father why he had ...

I enjoyed this! :) My hair whipped from side to side as I had stopped to find your music was so loud and clear meant for someone you hold dear. ...

You would probably call it my wrong turn but I say that it was fate for me to walk on that road again. That cold dark road that in my ...

Here are some corrections that I've made: She sat in bed, a place that she had not left for 2 days. Never had she felt this depressed or lonely. Every ...

"Don't you see we cannot be together anymore?" I said , holding back tears that threaten ed to come. "But, Rachel you know how I feel about, and I know ...

How can I tell you Just all that you are? Words dance at the tip of my tongue, - love this line, wonderful personification And yet, other words seem so ...