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Thanks, friend!

Alright. :D

Thank you! I think that here I was trying to make it sound simpler because it just seemed to fit the poem better and shock the reader with the darkness ...

Thank you! I most certainly will. :)

Wow, thank you so much! I'm blushing right now. :) I'm super happy it conveyed strong emotions to you! And I'm planning to post another poem in the next few ...

Wow, thank you so much! And yes, I sort of tried to build it up to make it more dark as it went on.

Oh, thank you! Since it's later, do you want to review it now?

Okay. I'm a little uncertain as to how I could use that in this poem, but I will certainly implement this in later poetry! Thank you so much for the ...

Okay. Do you have any tips on organization of it, and how I could improve that?

I'm glad it struck a chord with you. Thank you for reading.

Gah, this review was not crappy! I need to take out that me--thank you for alerting me to it! And I am going to do that! Do you have any ...

Thank you so much! I'm glad the imagery worked well. :) And I will definitely be posting more poems in the future! Do you have any tips on how to ...

Thank you so much! And you're right about the feeling repetition; I shall head over to my trusty thesaurus and fix that right now! Thanks again!

Thank you!

Wow, this is deep! I really don't have much to say; it's straightforward in a way that it doesn't use symbolism, yet still captures my attention and keeps it through ...