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Re: The Open Window
"He was only 16." - when writing stories, it is better to use words when writing numbers, this creates a more formal outlook, even when your writing style is more ...
Nov 3, 2014 -
Re: Shut In: Chapter 1
Only one mistake i could fine --that her father is PAYING me to be her friend. 'is' should be 'was', you are writing in past tense. Brilliant story i am ...
Nov 3, 2014