writergirl15

haha, I got it! What Juniper was talking was how your nor pleasure, ennui not the semblance of epiphany no escape from insanity "not line" makes the stomache go on ...

I am amazed, I knew you were good based on your well-written critique that you gave (thank you) but you write more brilliantly than I had expected. I like how ...

This isn't a typical rhyme here, because you are relying on voice and sound. Just one stanza doesn't flow without the rest so I like it because it is unique. ...

This is really cute and funny. I like how you use personification so here is a suggestion you can take or toss. The first thing that was more stiking to ...

I think you really show the intense, panting moments leading to something great-describe the embrace more, it deserves to be powerful in words so it is worth as much as ...