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That should have took you weeks to take! Its long yet doesn't lose interest, flows and can be seen from different emotions. I'm not one for poetry that is long ...

You are completely right! It is too short, it can sum up your emotion, sure. As long as thats what you want to do, I mean to sum something up ...

Good, very good. I can feel the emotion, and know its there...I think it can come through so much stronger. Poetry is based on emotion, poems can be very well ...