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For your first poem, this was great! It was very well written and gave hope. I really like the third and the last stanza. Very emotional and vivid imagery. Great ...

Very beautiful and flowing poem. It really made my heart squeeze with sorrow. But then made it fly when the person was glad that the mom would be able to ...

I don't like to be rude, but did you ever read Twilight? This is what it is based on. Fan-fiction. I'm sure you would understand once you read the series. ...

Aha! You are correct. Sorry that I forgot to post chapter six. =]

I am in total shock right now. Wow, this was a fatastic piece. The way it represents love for eternity is amazing. Dont say this wasn't your best work, 'cause ...

I liked this poem. I could feel the emotion and understand the feelings. Ver nice choice in words. It made it short and simple. Great job! Becca

Aha, I love this. The rhymes and flow make it easy to read. I really liked the way you added humor. Great job! just orange peel and apple pips I ...

Thanks for all the reviews guys. Yeah, I guess I was being a little hard on myslef. I recently decided that this is going to become a flashback in my ...

Yay, you do have the music! Awesome!

Wow, very nice poem. I love the emotion in this poem. It was easy to read and it flowed nicely. Great poem! Keep writing! Becca

Awww, wow...This was very dramatic. I loved it! I think you did an awesome job at your second try at romantic fiction. Totally loved this! Becca

The only thing that I saw wrong was aeons which I think you mean eons. Maybe? Very nice poem! Please continue writing!

Thank you so much guys! I appreciate all your reviews! I'm so glad that all of you liked it. don't really know everything about American lifestyle (I am from India) ...

wow, nice chapter. no major mistakes in this one. a few spelling errors is all. please update soon!